Our final idea

We have decided on a final idea which we have presented within a prezi which is shown below. We had to then present this to the rest of our class and their feedback will allows us to tweak and change our idea to something a bit better.

Within some of the feedback we were given, people have said that they like the idea of our story and that it was very detailed, allowing them to clearly understand what our opening is going to be like. They have also said that they think our idea will create a lot of suspense and will keep the audience 'on the edge of their seats'. 

However, our negative feedback that we have had include that they think our pitch didn't identify well enough what camera angles that we are going to use. They also have said that they were confused as to how our location is going to build enough suspense. We were also given advice to use various close up shots when our victim is under the bed. 

We will be using within our thriller different camera angles allowing the audience to get a realistic view from the POV of the victim and of the captor. Furthermore, we will be using different locations within the house as hiding places, and to show the captors travel throughout the house looking for the victim.